tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post8443517554798668572..comments2023-04-05T09:16:11.572-05:00Comments on mookuthi: Fiction fragment: Pooja's First Datemookuthihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03652916444537349473noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-72811391675824362562007-08-06T15:20:00.000-05:002007-08-06T15:20:00.000-05:00syl: thanks for reading. i havent read this author...syl: thanks for reading. i havent read this authors work..pls let me know some books that are a good read of this author:)mookuthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03652916444537349473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-48818720559618361512007-08-06T08:58:00.000-05:002007-08-06T08:58:00.000-05:00hi, glad to see that l'Occitane pleased you ;)was ...hi, glad to see that l'Occitane pleased you ;)<BR/>was expecting some tragic end while reading the beginning of the story... Ouf!, as we say here (=relief)<BR/>did you ever read Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni? <BR/>take care and keep writing!<BR/>sylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-34849915866324753382007-07-26T18:04:00.000-05:002007-07-26T18:04:00.000-05:00Thanks radha:)Thanks radha:)Domestic Diva's Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17473407585931196389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-49772972806354090812007-07-26T03:23:00.000-05:002007-07-26T03:23:00.000-05:00Nice work Mookuthi!!Nice work Mookuthi!!Radhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17019567538933256974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-89672987181509920292007-07-22T10:07:00.000-05:002007-07-22T10:07:00.000-05:00@uma Thanks..:)@uma Thanks..:)mookuthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03652916444537349473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-25306045521261809852007-07-22T09:39:00.000-05:002007-07-22T09:39:00.000-05:00I agree with what Lotus said. The style of writing...I agree with what Lotus said. The style of writing may need work, but the thoughts were precious.<BR/><BR/>Love<BR/>Umaamazon498ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11841572932405798005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-50808555413195989832007-07-21T09:37:00.000-05:002007-07-21T09:37:00.000-05:00Lotus : Thanks for your comments ...please keep re...Lotus : Thanks for your comments ...please keep reading:)mookuthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03652916444537349473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-61629349776532213722007-07-21T09:33:00.000-05:002007-07-21T09:33:00.000-05:00Mookuthi I liked this story very much. It tells me...Mookuthi I liked this story very much. It tells me that often we spend time and money on expensive things, little realizing that some of life's best pleasures are free or nearly free. Sitting on the rocks eating biriyani with someone you love, it sure beats sitting at a fancy restaurant with a group of rich but constipated diners! ;) <BR/><BR/>Write more stories. I enjoyed this one!!!Lotus Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02081192215823615529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-87671455754319278972007-07-19T09:12:00.000-05:002007-07-19T09:12:00.000-05:00@manas: thanks for reading,this is just a fragment...@manas: thanks for reading,this is just a fragment, Not a full story.<BR/>@chilee: Thanks...will add more of my creative juices with more substance...:DDomestic Diva's Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17473407585931196389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-22246989780296455092007-07-19T00:38:00.000-05:002007-07-19T00:38:00.000-05:00It is a nice piece. If I have to be more critical,...It is a nice piece. If I have to be more critical, I will say it needs more work. There is more description and less substance.Leena Sayshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07599784118982845842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-24197845766188521852007-07-17T17:26:00.000-05:002007-07-17T17:26:00.000-05:00It was good, but the end was left hanging, somehow...It was good, but the end was left hanging, somehow I felt no closureUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17368075412290807127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-58255218315168209022007-07-17T10:00:00.000-05:002007-07-17T10:00:00.000-05:00@ anonymous: I didn't understand what you said ......@ anonymous: I didn't understand what you said ...but keep reading and enjoymookuthihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03652916444537349473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2726778361061088733.post-52861059119825897862007-07-16T19:47:00.000-05:002007-07-16T19:47:00.000-05:00the story is interested for the reason the brief c...the story is interested for the reason the brief could not be arrived atAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com